Author Loree Lough shared information recently on Smart
Plotting (or how to avoid the dreaded
sagging middle) at a writers’ meeting I attended recently.
She is a bestselling and award winning author of 105
books and more than 5,000.000 fiction and non-fiction books in circulation, as
well as 72 short stories and more than 2,500 articles in print.
The main suggestion I
found helpful was that to fill in the middle, you want to
start the ending. Give readers hints as to what is coming. Since I am more of a
pantser, (writing without a detailed outline), I sometimes do not have a clear
picture of the ending so get hung up in the middle of my story. So I found her
approach interesting.
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| Sophia Prunty had a chance to speak to author Loree Lough at a recent writers' meeting. |
Cliffhangers are important, she said, because you
want at the end of each chapter to have the reader ask “And then what happens?”
She gave everyone copies of a blank Plot Timeline. You
can add to it or change it as needed, she said. Using a similar timeline will
help you keep track of important details about your hero and heroine, your theme,
the season, setting and time period of your story. The Plot Timeline is useful
for short stories, scripts and even non-fiction, as well as novels.
The timeline has spaces for chapter information and
scenes within each chapter. Plus, she uses tags or symbols to indicate if a
scene is a happy one, sad, spiritual, love or exciting. This gives you the
opportunity to see if you are including enough of what you planned at a quick
glance. As you are reviewing, you can make sure you did not leave something
important out.
She gave an example of one of her earlier stories
where she had introduced the people who had raised an orphaned girl, but forget
to have them later at the girl’s wedding or explain why they weren’t there. So
she had to rework the ending.
In Scene One, you want to introduce the character,
the season and setting and start the action. You do not want to put everything
into that first chapter.
“Jerk their
chain. Pump it up,” she said. Readers want more than just a good story. You
must have emotion in everything. They want to feel, to understand. Stories are
a form of entertainment.
Think of your reader when you are writing, she said.
Inform and entertain the reader. In a mystery, there should be sufficient clues
that the mystery could be solved but also red herrings to throw people off the
track.
If you have writer’s block, do some freestyle
writing, Loree suggested. Prompts are good for this. A short period of just
writing quickly will help you get back to your novel or short story. We often
offer a writing prompt for our critique group and it amazing how many different
approaches there are to the same prompt.
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| This is an early book by Loree Lough who has had more than 100 books published |
Teen Sophia Prunty, who came to the meeting with her
grandmother Betty Houck, was pleased with the presentation. “It was fun and
very informative. She knew what she was talking about,” she said. “She used
examples from her own stories and showed how the process worked for her.”
Sophia is writing a coming-of-age story about teenagers
and discussed some of it with Loree, who asked questions and mentioned how the
story could go in different directions and how she could give information about
her characters by what they did or their reaction to events instead of just
saying it.
“It was
really good. She used the timeline as a skeleton. Filled that in first and then
worked around it.” Sophia said. “She went to the second step in the planning
process.”
Sophia said she is trying the National Novel Writing
Month challenge (Nanowrimo) for the first time, but is behind because of school
and other activities. “But at least I have some of the writing done, more than I
would have if I had not tried to do this. I will continue to write more.”
Joelle Jarvis, who is president of the Carroll
County Chapter Maryland Writers’ Association, is also participating in
Nanowrimo, along with several of the other 17 writers at the meeting. For more
information about this annual writing challenge check out www.nanowrimo.com.
Loree’s blog can be found at theloughdown@blogspot.com and she
can be found on Facebook, Twitter and Pinterest.
